Sunday, 11 October 2015

Teacher Feedback

Ellenia,

Summary and Strengths

Your blog has a good quality of posts that are completed and finished (e.g. Prezi genre conventions) – your idea is also a good one and will lend itself to a high quality bit of coursework
You have a lowish number of posts at this stage (which we have discussed) – the quality of presentation and analysis is band 3 but we need further research and planning

Targets
  • Further posts – set yourself blog post targets every week and make progress every week – stay on top of deadlines!
  • Look at the blogs of others in the class- esp use of software to present certain key posts for that dynamic presentation style
  • Research – trailer analysis needs more trailers analysed and each one analysed in detail with subheadings etc – sound, mise en scene etc – you can stick with your chosen genre also now
  • The Crush order of scenes – what have you learned?


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