This is a slightly improved version of the first draft of my trailer. As suggested by my target audience, those who commented on it on YouTube, suggested I add a bit more footage as they felt they wanted to see more of it. Another audience members suggested I made the volume of the music tracks I chose the same throughout as they thought it wasn't consistent and because I also felt that it wasn't the same, this is the first thing I fixed. I also removed a couple of parts of some clips as they didn't really help or change the narrative in any way. As a whole, I think it is better with these changes, although they are small. I will also be waiting for some feedback from my teacher and will be making some changes in order to try and make my trailer as realistic as possible.
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