Priceless Trailer: First Draft

This is the first draft for my trailer Priceless. I tried including as much footage as well as inter-titles in order to deliver my films narrative across to my targeted audience in an effective way. I feel like the footage I have filmed generally flows well and I am hoping the story line is in fact delivered to my audience members in the way I hoped. I have shared it on YouTube and I am waiting on some feedback, negatives and positives to see how people think I could improve my trailer in order to make it more appealing.