Trailer Draft 1: Audience Feedback

As previously mentioned, I shared the first draft of my trailer on YouTube in order to receive some feedback. I shared this in a Facebook group chat and asked people to give me both pros and cons as I wanted to get different views and opinions on how I could improve my trailer. So far these are the only comments I received however, I did ask more people so I should have more feedback coming so I can try and improve as much as I can.